Saturday, April 10, 2010

So below, drying out and work harder.

1. Spring flowers are fallen stars.

2. crick-crack crick crick-crack. Pine cones are opening in the hot bright air.

3. A crow watches the collared doves. A mean boss on a warm Friday afternoon.

1 comment:

  1. This is a poetic trio Clare. Any of these could work well in the haiku spirit, especially the juxtaposition in #3. Since I've been writing 3BT's every day I've noticed so many times when they've overlapped with my haiku writings. It's a great way to pay attention to things that might slip away.

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